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If I Die Young by daniellesylvan If I Die Young by daniellesylvan
If I die young, bury me in satin,
lay me down on a bed of roses,
sink me in the river at dawn,
send me away with the words of a love song."

-The Band Perry

Watch the video of me drawing HERE: [link]

Decided to enter into the "Girl With A Flower" contest! :) [link]
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*RavenSetFree's piece, "If I Die Young" is a striking image that immediately caught my eye for several reasons.

:bulletblack: Subjective - Emotional Impact/Thoughts
First-off, I want to touch on the emotional impact of the image. Without knowing the inspiration, there is a peacefulness to the image. The young woman's eyes are closed, her expression fairly neutral, but the raised eyebrows help give her a peaceful look. She isn't smiling, but she doesn't look the least bit sad. Knowing the inspiration, the peacefulness remains and that expression fits so well with the feelings I get from the song itself: just the slightest bit of sadness, but also a sort of calmness and certainty.

Her robes are almost ethereal as if she were part of the water she's beginning to sink into - overall a very beautiful image. Her hair and robes blend into and become part of the water, adding to the image a ghostly feeling.

:bulletblack: Objective - Technical Details
The first thing to really draw my eye are the colors. They harmonize very well. Their softness lends to the peaceful feeling - a feeling easily attached to the shades of blue in the piece. Yellow is generally seen as more joyful, and blends beautifully with the water. The brighter, lighter yellow draws attention to the top of the image, but the image isn't top-heavy by any means. It's balanced out by the blue-greens at the bottom which are darker.

The roses break from the cooler blues and greens with their red, but they retain a cooler scheme and frame the figure very well. The break up the blues, greens, and yellows to keep them from becoming too monotonous without being too distracting from the main focus of the painting.

The folds of her robes help create a focal point around her arms, and I find my eyes guided to her peaceful face. The level of details is very nice - just enough to be interesting but not too much as to be distracting where it shouldn't be. The most contrast and detail are around her hands, chest, and face, keeping our attention in that area.

The composition is very good with the figure's head being toward the top, but still not being too heavy thanks to details like roses and billowing sleeves.

Over all, I can find very little to put down about this piece. I might say her forearms seem a little thick compared to the rest of her very slender figure, but it's nothing very distracting... and besides that, I admit my own grasp of human anatomy isn't nearly as good as this talented artist's!

:bulletblack: In Conclusion
This is a very relaxing painting that manages to retain a peaceful feeling around a floating figure in spite of the theme of the inspiration. The colors fit the theme of the painting well and it seems to be a very balanced image.

Vision
Beautiful image from a beautiful inspiration source.

Originality
Fairly peaceful, reminds me of old Greek statues (not a bad thing!)

Technique
Very well-done, painterly, but not too painterly... I style I'm personally very fond of and pulled off well here.

Impact
I'm very impressed with the artwork all around.

P.S. Forgive me for writing a book. I may have rambled a bit much...
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This is beautiful. The colours caught my eye instantly. I love the texture of this piece! The colours were obviously chosen very wisely. They go together very well. One thing I specifically like is the roses. :) I love how to ripples by the roses look so amazing. Otherwise, the lighting and shading are in the correct places (I'm pretty sure) and it's fascinating how you blended the woman right into the water instead of having solid black lines surround the girl itself and the water too.

Vision
It looks amazing how the colours are blended. The texture is awesome too! c: The lighting and shading is awesome too.

Originality
I have to say that this is very much original. I like how you took a piece of the lyrics out of the song and made it into a fantastic masterpiece!

Technique
The technique is wonderful. Everything looks realistic.. (to me of course xD)

Impact
This turned out very well overall! I hope I can see more of your artwork in the future. ;D

Awesome work~! (P.S. I might not be the BEST judger considering my art isn't really that great.. ^^; But I'm not saying this piece isn't amazing!)

~Mapleshadeforever
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DragonFireSoul Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is beautiful, brilliant, and inspiring. keep up the good work
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seraphimon83 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013   Traditional Artist
This was the print I traded you for at San Japan 6. You picked up up my last Link print. I'm quite glad it went to you.
I wasted no time in pinning this to my wall. I love the way you use color and line in your work. Imma do my best to learn from you and make my own art better.
Oh, and the title... Yeah, that got me in mah heart place liek right thur. :p I love The Band Perry. I sung (poorly) to that CD on the road so much that the red lights got smart and just changed quickly whenever I was around.
Anyway, I gotta tell you this print was love at first sight. It reminded me somewhat of the Lady of the Water from Arthurian legend. I love the way you've done her face. So soft are her features (yoda voice) :p
I wish you the best in your next projects. Would love to work another con with you someday. Take care! :D
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daniellesylvan Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
Thank you so much! I am so glad you like the picture so much :) And thank you for trading with me! You had some very great work! Sorry I was in such a rush to leave- had to get to the airport! I hope you had a fantastic weekend at the convention. I go to a lot of cons so maybe I will see you at another! :) Best of luck to you as well!
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Kari-Twilight-Mist Featured By Owner May 18, 2013
Oh wow this is beautiful. I absolutely love how you had her dress and the water blend.
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daniellesylvan Featured By Owner May 21, 2013
Thanks!!
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HorseWolfLover Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
she is very beautyful :) i love it *adding to faves*
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daniellesylvan Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
Thank you!
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selftaughtartist1 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Filmographer
wow! very well done! :)
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daniellesylvan Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
Thank you!
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selftaughtartist1 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student Filmographer
you're welcome :)
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